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my poems. anyone can post theirs.

Postby peanut 2424 » Fri Sep 08, 2006 3:05 pm

here is my latest poem i made....

I feel alone
I feel the silence that creeps around me
I see nothing; nothing that involves noise or movement
I am lonesome in this world

As I turn the corner of a street,
I see nothing but the road ahead of me
No cars, or loud noises
Only the noises of the woods dead ahead

As I enter the woods I hear small things
Like animals chewing on food
Or the wind that screeches like a child

I walk deeper and deeper into the woods
And the deeper I walk, the darker it gets
I feel afraid as the rain pushes down on me
I have no place to run; I have no place to hide
And yet I feel alone

The thunder growls and the lightning hurls
And it makes me feel more scared
I need somebody, anybody
So I scream for help, and yet none came
I scream louder and louder each time, yet nobody hears me
I am alone

The storm gets closer, and closer
And more harsh and dank
I sit by a tree and I sit alone

I hug my knees and saying the silliest things to reassure my self
I wish my beloved would come for me
I wish he came with me
I need protection, and yet I don’t have any
None can protect me from this world

I start to get colder as I lay on the wet ground
The rain whipping at me as if I were a slave
I lay there, and I cry although it won’t do any good
You can barely see my tears from the rain
“What is this world?â€
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Postby willownut » Fri Sep 15, 2006 8:04 pm

oh boy - poetry - yeah.
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So did the happy ending come after you read it and got all sad?
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Postby peanut 2424 » Fri Sep 15, 2006 8:15 pm

willownut wrote:oh boy - poetry - yeah.
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So did the happy ending come after you read it and got all sad?
lol. actually, i was on my other message boards, and i was talking to my friend star (is what we call her) and i showed her the happier ending. then i just came up with the sadder ending.
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Postby The Key » Sat Sep 16, 2006 12:03 am

That was good. :)
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Postby peanut 2424 » Sat Sep 16, 2006 10:11 am

The Key wrote:That was good. :)
yep. i write poetry all the time. Do you write?
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Postby The Key » Sat Sep 16, 2006 10:52 pm

Umm . . . S-O-R-T of.

I don't really think I'm that good at poetry.
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Postby peanut 2424 » Wed Sep 20, 2006 4:33 pm

nah, i bet you are. if you want to... do you mind writting one for me? your probably better than me, but you just don't know it! ;)
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Postby peanut 2424 » Fri Sep 22, 2006 9:23 pm

hey. how are you by the way? lol.
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Postby WillowLuver » Sun Oct 01, 2006 4:17 pm

Hey, i have a poem. Can i share it here? Or do you demand that i open a new thread? I thought that i would ask before i post it.
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Postby NinesevenOh4 » Wed Oct 18, 2006 2:18 pm

I liked the poem well expressed!I write poetry 2
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